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Black inventors as for example George Washington Carver, who created a number of methods to enhance the efficiency of agronomy, are imporant for the development of the United States Kein Komma too . Occasionally African Americans are involved in politics and communication media as well as in radio and television.
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The term Asian American refers to all individuals “having origins in any of the original peoples of the Far East, Southeast Asia, or the Indian subcontinent”(Zitat nehmich an) . Besides for instance humans out of China, India, Japan, Korea, Pakistan or Malaysia, the term includes residents who self- identify themselves as Asian, Filipino, Vietnamese or other Asian(?) . Whereby, in the following elaboration there are no differences among Asian American alone or in combination with another race(unglücklich ausgedrückt).


Even if the Asian Americans with 5.6 percent of the total population (roughly 17.3 millions) are not the biggest minority group of the United States, they are in spite of all that a really important one. Between 2000 and 2010, percentage change of this group is with 45.57 percent the highest of all demographic groups. An important consideration for that fact is that the major part of them did not immigrate before the 1960s. Already with the Chinese Exclusion Act in 1882 the immigration of Asian became forbidden(V: illegal). In the year 1907, the immigration of labour migrants out of Japan prohibited once again (Gentlemen's Agreement). In the wake of the Immigration Act of 1917, all the other Asians have no permission to immigrate onward. During World War II, many Asians were kidnapped and brought to internment camps. Only after the dismissal of the Immigration Act (1924) in the year 1965, Asians became able to immigrate unimpeded to the United States on a large scale .

Today, almost every Asian American can speak English and surely commonly Asian languages, but at home nearly 80 percent speak Chinese. Relating to religion, they have sundry thinking. Atheism, Agnosticism, Buddhism, Hinduism, Islam and also Christianly are noted. Consequently they are divided into many ethnic subgroups as for example Bangladeshi and Pakistani Americans, Indian Americans, Filipino Americans and Vietnamese Americans which all had really different opinions and beliefs based on their history . As compared to other minority groups, there is no appreciable demographic concentration. With 57 percent, Asian American only made up the highest proportion of population in Hawaii. Thereby not only the relative small number of Asian American, but also the many ethnic subgroups are significant points. As opposed to the other minority groups, the Asian Americans have the highest level of education. In 2010, 91.2 percent of Asian American men and 87 percent of the Asian American women had a high school graduate or more. Actually 52.55 percent even had a college graduate or more . On the basis of higher education, their real median household income totals 64,308 dollars in 2010 . Therewith they even earn roughly 10,000 dollars more than the White Americans and 15,000 dollars more than the everyman. Thereby, the most of them are engaged in the service sector, the computer industry or in the software industry in promising positions. Beyond that just 12.1 percent of the Asian Americans are affected of poverty, the second lowest percentage after the White Americans . Farther, Asian Americans change as practitioners the medical horizon and influence therewith the healthcare system and medical technologcontinously. Politics, science, business, entertainment and arts are other domains, the Asian American affect the daily American life. One of the most important circle of influence is notwithstanding food. In daily American life, the Chinese or Asian food is the new generation of fast food.

Altogether the Asian Americans often award the term “model minority” as regards exemplary function. Due to diligence, patience and adaption, Asian Americans get good education, good jobs and earn good money. Other minority groups should follow them and keep working hard to get the same status. According to all accounts, Asian Americans are no longer discriminated against and will be accepted in society. But looking from the viewpoint of the Asian Americans, even so they are admittedly not discriminated against in this way, they are nevertheless not exempt of discrimination.

If the so called Chinatowns are places of deliberately secession from the other Americans is iffy(vllt nicht das richtige wort für eine wissenschaftliche Arbeit). Examples for today´s Chinatowns are San Francisco, Los Angeles, Chicago, New York City and many others. In past times these Chinatowns are often condemned as dirty and unhygienic districts, but in the last 20 years a process of change has introduced. All the while there are popular tourist attractions, but no accepted residential areas. Any time recently, there infrastructure and education institutes are enlarged and refurbished(welches Tempus/was willst du genau sagen?). However this fact operates sinister(böse/unheimlich?) to the traditional Chinese characteristic and primary meaning in times of gold rush (as of 1848). Today only few Asian Americans, mainly old-established families, live there. Moreover, many in suburbs living Asians, visit events or their friends there and utilize the Chinatowns to obtain contacts to other Asian Americans. For the aspiring new generation of African Americans, Chinatowns be(are) immaterial. They live in big cities, for instance New Yor,k altogether with the
White Americans.

Anmerkung:

Da ich mich in der Materie wenig auskenne fällt es mir teilweise schwer einzuschätzen was du genau sagen willst. Das wiederum erschwert mir die genaue Korrektur.

Desweiteren fände ich es gut wenn auch jemand anderes nochmal darüber schauen würde. Ich bin nicht perfekt und mein Englischabschluss war 2008.

Der letzte Teil:

Foregoing, the situation of ethnic minorities in the United States of America are shown, but if you look at their actual situation you also want to know which social position they will have in the future and which trends can be noted.

According to predictions of the Bureau of the Census in 2009, the white Americans will be the minority in 2050 . The total population should rise to 399 million, among which the Non- Hispanics Whites make up only 49.9 percent of the total population in the United States. Especially the number of Hispanics shall grow. In relation to their actual part of the population (16.3 percent), they shall rise to roughly 28 percent in the year 2050. Today, this scenario is expected some years later, but in general, the White Americans probably will be the minority in the next 50 years. In addition to that, the age distribution of the United States will be changed fundamentally. That based on the high birth rate and the circumstance, that the average age of the actual minority groups is distinct under them of the White Americans. Furthermore, more than half of all new-born babies will be no White American. Another point is that a high number of minority group members marry someone of another race or ethnicity . This mixture of ethnic groups and races provides the proportional rise on the total population of minorities a lot. More and more of this some other race or race in combination members self identify themselves as Hispanics, African American of Asian American. An increase of minorities also matters in any way to religion. The share of Catholics will be augmented due to the increasing number of Hispanics, because 72 percent of them are ones. Independent of the mentioned facts, the demographic concentration of minorities will be exist further. Resulting of this, the importance of minorities as regards to elections and for the culture of these states will be rising, too. New minority-majority states will be evolved. Most members of the minority groups will be integrated in respect of language, but not in respect of religion and culture. The biggest part of them will live together with the Whites and not in social exclusion, but preserve their values and traditions.


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Summarizing all aspects, you come to the following conclusion of the situation of ethnic minorities in the United States today:
Every single minority groups has its specific problems and a precise status in the society of the United States. Based on this circumstance, special and adjusted rankings can be created. Concerning to education, the Asian American even surpass the White Americans and are independent from race or ethnicity at the top of the United States. Therewith, an minority group is more educated as the originally residents. On the other hand, African American and especially Hispanics are backward in type of education. As a consequence of this, they have lower chances to get a (good) job and earn good money. This fact is mirrored in poverty statistics. 26.6 percent of all Hispanics and actually 27.4 percent of the African Americans are affected of poverty. They must live without high-price merchandise and must pinch pennies to buy food or clothes. These circumstances entail the crime rate as well as the number of drug addicts of the two minority groups. Here, too, the Asian Americans, with a poverty rate of 12.1 percent, almost can catch up the White Americans with only 9.9 percent. Moreover, the highly qualified Asian Americans averagely earn 10,000 dollars more than the White Americans and even 15,000 dollars more than the statewide real median household income. Because of bad education, not only the Hispanics, but also the African American can only do easy and lower paid work. As a result, African Americans only earn 64.86 percent and the Hispanics 76.37 percent of the average citizen income. Any way you look at it, you must avow that the African Americans and the Hispanics have a low social status, based on less education, far smaller income and a higher rate of poverty while the Asian Americans have reached the American Dream in its entirety. They are partly better off than the White Americans and enjoy a higher standard of education.

Beyond that the social status of each group in the United States shall receive a thorough examination. While the African Americans had a dire history in the United States, their current rank is discusses most frequent. Since the colonization there are treated as slaves and inferior race, but today a clear advancement is noticeable. Nowadays African Americans are equal before the law and rather they have the same rights and obligations. However, visceral antagonism is still a stiff subject. While many people accepted them and treat them as equal, other Americans have a violent aversion to the so called Blacks still today. Consequently an approach can only happen step-by-step. Furthermore, Hispanics and even Asian American, the model minority, are discriminated against, but to a lesser extent. Both of them are not restricted in everyday life as the African American are. To sum it up, you can say that the social statuses of the single minority groups differ extremely, but coherences with their education and income thus far that the Asian Americans are the most accepted and tolerated minority group. To improve the situation of the other groups, not only the White Americans must stop their discrimination against them, but also the members of the minority groups must try to live together with the Whites and do everything to be considered as integrated because of their language ability and attempts to get an optimal level of education. A further endeavor shall be the avoidance of drugs, violence and crime. If these points heeded from both sides, the White Americans and the respective minority group, a better communal life can be created.


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Überschriften:

Obama - Erlöser der Schwarzen? --> Obama - savior of the Blacks?
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Schwarze und Weiße (Amerikaner) - ein vorbelastetes Verhältnis --> Blacks and White Americans - a handicapped relationship?
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Chinatowns[Chinesenviertel] - gewollte Abgrenzung oder Einzelfall? --> Chinatowns - deliberately [?es gibt so viel für Abgrenzung (evtl. eclusion)?] or individual case?
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Asiatische Amerikaner - ein Musterbeispiel für Anpassung? --> Asian Americans - a perfect example of adaption?
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'Spanische' Amerikaner - eine Minderheitengruppe auf dem Vormarsch --> Hispanics - a minority group gaining ground
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Große Anzahl - großer Einfluss? --> Great many - wide influences?
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Zukunftsaussichten und 'Entwicklungen' --> Future prospects and trends

Bitte möglichst bis morgen Mittag korrigieren / durchlesen und unbedingt als Zitat antworten!!!


Nochmals zusammengefasst:

The term Hispanics (or Latino) refers to all individuals of “Cuban, Mexican, Puerto Rican, South or Central American, or other Spanish culture or origin regardless of race” . Beside for instance humans out of Argentina, Spain or Ecuadorian, the term includes residents who self-identity themselves as Hispanics, impartial of their race. As distinct from the other minority groups, the term Hispanic is independent of race. Whereby, in the following elaboration there are the Hispanics as a whole and without any differences among the single subgroups examined.

The term is characterized by the US administration in the 1970s. Nowadays it substantiated mostly on self-identification, based on similar social and political interest as for instance bilingual lessons in school or better chances to keep the citizenship of the United States. Hispanics are continuous represented in the United States since the 16th century and with this longer as every other minority group. The Spanish, as representatives of the today’s Hispanics, built the first European settlement in the territory of today’s United States of America. Especially in military, Hispanics involved since the American Revolution not only continuously, but also successfully and in the higher echelons .

With over 50 million supporters and numeral 16.3 percent of the total population, the Hispanics represent the largest minority group in the United States . The Mexicans embody with 63.0 percent by far the biggest subgroup. Between 2000 and 2010, percentage change of this group is with 43.0 percent the second highest of all demographic groups. The chief reason for that is the more and more increasing birth rate. Only a fractional part of the Hispanics had immigrated in the last years. Since 2000, the number of new immigrants proportional is pushed into the background . Despite all subgroups, there is a demographic concentration of them in the West and South of the United States . 41 percent of them live in the West and 36 percent in the South. Totaled up, more than three-quarters of them live there.

Today, Hispanics are nearly equally affected of poverty than the African Americans. 26.6 percent of the Hispanics must live with deprived backgrounds . Numerical, roughly 13.4 million Hispanics lack on existential needs. Consequently, just above 30 percent of all Hispanics are uninsured . Moreover, only 62.9 percent of all Hispanics have a high school graduate in 2010 . Even African Americans with 84.2 percent have much more. In addition to that, only 13.9 percent of the Hispanics have a college graduate or more. Taking it all round, they have by a long way the lowest standard of education and with this the worst chances to get a job and improve their situation. To crown it all, the Hispanics who have a daily occupation, only have a real median household income of 37,759 dollars . That implies that a daily occupation not necessarily helps to get a middle-class life, but improves their situation in spite of everything in any case. Thought 35 percent of the Hispanics are immigrated in the last five years, bilingualism is usual. Nonetheless 70 percent of them talk Spanish with some Anglicism at home or with the family. In terms of religion, the Hispanics are in complete agreement. 72 percent of them are Catholic, 19 percent are Protestant and most of the others have no religious preferences.

There cultural and political meaning increased in the last years steadily. The traditional Spanish music influences all the major musical genres in this day and age. With Robert Goizueta, the head of The Coca-Cola Company or Charlie Sheen as an actor, the Hispanics are represented in business and media as well. Beside the same circle of influence as the other minority groups, for example science, sports and literature, the Hispanics influence the political and economic happenings, too. Based on their baby boom and strong growing percentage of total population, this group wins influences at a high rate. For the simple reason that they often live in big states with a large number of electors, they can affect presidential elections deeply. For the same reason, they can turn the scale in so called swing states which have no discernible party affiliation. In the economic sense, Hispanics embody a large share in the market. By way of example the baby and children sector can mention. Almost half of all newborn babies are descendants of Hispanics. In summary, it can be stated that the Hispanics as a whole influences the United States in every department.
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Zusätzliches zum Deckblatt:

Wie schreibe ich "Frau Beispiel" -> 'Ms. Beispiel' oder was???
Wie kann ich Klasse 13 schreiben? -> 'class 13' oder wie???
Wie wird folgendes formuliert -> 'verfasst im Dezember 2011'

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Foregoing, the situation of ethnic minorities in the United States of America are shown, but if you look at their actual situation you also want to know which social position they will have in the future and which trends can be noted.

According to predictions of the Bureau of the Census in 2009, the white Americans will be the minority in 2050 . The total population should rise to 399 million, among which the Non- Hispanics Whites make up only 49.9 percent of the total population in the United States. Especially the number of Hispanics shall grow. In relation to their actual part of the population (16.3 percent), they shall rise to roughly 28 percent in the year 2050. Today, this scenario is expected some years later, but in general, the White Americans probably will be the minority in the next 50 years. In addition to that, the age distribution of the United States will be changed fundamentally. That based on the high birth rate and the circumstance, that the average age of the actual minority groups is distinct under them of the White Americans. Furthermore, more than half of all new-born babies will be no White American. Another point is that a high number of minority group members marry someone of another race or ethnicity . This mixture of ethnic groups and races provides the proportional rise on the total population of minorities a lot. More and more of this some other race or race in combination members self identify themselves as Hispanics, African American of Asian American. An increase of minorities also matters in any way to religion. The share of Catholics will be augmented due to the increasing number of Hispanics, because 72 percent of them are ones. Independent of the mentioned facts, the demographic concentration of minorities will be exist further. Resulting of this, the importance of minorities as regards to elections and for the culture of these states will be rising, too. New minority-majority states will be evolved. Most members of the minority groups will be integrated in respect of language, but not in respect of religion and culture. The biggest part of them will live together with the Whites and not in social exclusion, but preserve their values and traditions.


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Summarizing all aspects, you come to the following conclusion of the situation of ethnic minorities in the United States today:
Every single minority groups has its specific problems and a precise status in the society of the United States. Based on this circumstance, special and adjusted rankings can be created. Concerning to education, the Asian American even surpass the White Americans and are independent from race or ethnicity at the top of the United States. Therewith, an minority group is more educated as the originally residents. On the other hand, African American and especially Hispanics are backward in type of education. As a consequence of this, they have lower chances to get a (good) job and earn good money. This fact is mirrored in poverty statistics. 26.6 percent of all Hispanics and actually 27.4 percent of the African Americans are affected of poverty. They must live without high-price merchandise and must pinch pennies to buy food or clothes. These circumstances entail the crime rate as well as the number of drug addicts of the two minority groups. Here, too, the Asian Americans, with a poverty rate of 12.1 percent, almost can catch up the White Americans with only 9.9 percent. Moreover, the highly qualified Asian Americans averagely earn 10,000 dollars more than the White Americans and even 15,000 dollars more than the statewide real median household income. Because of bad education, not only the Hispanics, but also the African American can only do easy and lower paid work. As a result, African Americans only earn 64.86 percent and the Hispanics 76.37 percent of the average citizen income. Any way you look at it, you must avow that the African Americans and the Hispanics have a low social status, based on less education, far smaller income and a higher rate of poverty while the Asian Americans have reached the American Dream in its entirety. They are partly better off than the White Americans and enjoy a higher standard of education.

Beyond that the social status of each group in the United States shall receive a thorough examination. While the African Americans had a dire history in the United States, their current rank is discusses most frequent. Since the colonization there are treated as slaves and inferior race, but today a clear advancement is noticeable. Nowadays African Americans are equal before the law and rather they have the same rights and obligations. However, visceral antagonism is still a stiff subject. While many people accepted them and treat them as equal, other Americans have a violent aversion to the so called Blacks still today. Consequently an approach can only happen step-by-step. Furthermore, Hispanics and even Asian American, the model minority, are discriminated against, but to a lesser extent. Both of them are not restricted in everyday life as the African American are. To sum it up, you can say that the social statuses of the single minority groups differ extremely, but coherences with their education and income thus far that the Asian Americans are the most accepted and tolerated minority group. To improve the situation of the other groups, not only the White Americans must stop their discrimination against them, but also the members of the minority groups must try to live together with the Whites and do everything to be considered as integrated because of their language ability and attempts to get an optimal level of education. A further endeavor shall be the avoidance of drugs, violence and crime. If these points heeded from both sides, the White Americans and the respective minority group, a better communal life can be created.


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Überschriften:

Obama - Erlöser der Schwarzen? --> Obama - savior of the Blacks?
..........................................
Schwarze und Weiße (Amerikaner) - ein vorbelastetes Verhältnis --> Blacks and White Americans - a handicapped relationship?
..........................................
Chinatowns[Chinesenviertel] - gewollte Abgrenzung oder Einzelfall? --> Chinatowns - deliberately [?es gibt so viel für Abgrenzung (evtl. eclusion)?] or individual case?
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Asiatische Amerikaner - ein Musterbeispiel für Anpassung? --> Asian Americans - a perfect example of adaption?
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'Spanische' Amerikaner - eine Minderheitengruppe auf dem Vormarsch --> Hispanics - a minority group gaining ground
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Große Anzahl - großer Einfluss? --> Great many - wide influences?
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Zukunftsaussichten und 'Entwicklungen' --> Future prospects and trends

Bitte möglichst bis morgen Mittag korrigieren / durchlesen und unbedingt als Zitat antworten!!!

schade, ich bin wohl zu spät...

Melli1401

The term Hispanics (or Latino) refers to all individuals of “Cuban, Mexican, Puerto Rican, South or Central American, or other Spanish culture or origin regardless of race” . Beside for instance humans out of Argentina, Spain or Ecuadorian, the term includes residents who self-identity (SUGAR:...identify??) themselves as Hispanics, impartial of their race. As distinct from the other minority groups, the term Hispanic is independent of race. Whereby, in the following elaboration there are the Hispanics as a whole and without any differences among the single subgroups examined.

The term is characterized by the US administration in the 1970s. Nowadays it (SUGAR: .. it is mostly substantiated on) substantiated mostly on self-identification, based on similar social and political interest as for instance bilingual lessons in school or better (SUGAR:... improved chances...) chances to keep (SUGAR: ist wirklich KEEP gemeint? oder to get???) the citizenship of the United States. Hispanics are continuous represented in the United States since the 16th century and (SUGAR: with this im Sinne von "damit" wäre besser übersetzt mit "with it oder therewith ) longer as every other minority (SUGAR: GROUP ist hier redundant!) group. The Spanish, as representatives of the today’s (SUGAR: Apostrophitis?) Hispanics, built the first European settlement in the territory of today’s United States of America. Especially in military, (SUGAR: Komma weg) Hispanics involved since the American Revolution not only continuously, but also successfully and in the higher echelons .

With over 50 million supporters and numeral 16.3 percent of the total population, the Hispanics represent the largest minority (SUGAR: Wieder die unnötige GROUP) group in the United States . The Mexicans embody (SUGAR: Embody = darstellen, besser wäre in Abwechslung zu represent das Wort "turns out to be oder depict) with 63.0 percent by far the biggest subgroup. Between 2000 and 2010, percentage change of this group is with 43.0 percent the second highest of all demographic groups. The chief (SUGAR: MAINREASON) reason for that is the more and more increasing birth rate.
(SUGAR: The main reason for this raising is the increasing birth-rate)

Only a fractional part of the Hispanics had(SUGAR: have) immigrated in the last years. Since 2000, the number (SUGAR: Besser quantity?) of new immigrants (SUGAR: is proprtionally pushed) proportional is pushed into the background . Despite all subgroups, there is a demographic concentration of them (SUGAR: Hier muss THEM ersetzt werden durch die Beschreibung det Gruppe... bspw. The Hispanics...) in the West and South of the United States . 41 percent of them live in the West and (SUGAR: AND bedeutet zusätzlich, besser durch Komma trennen um Mißverständnisse zu vermeiden) 36 percent in the South. Totaled up, more than three-quarters of them live there.

Today, Hispanics are nearly equally affected of poverty than (SUGAR: THAN = AS) the African Americans. 26.6 percent of the Hispanics must live with deprived backgrounds . Numerical, roughly 13.4 million Hispanics lack on existential needs. Consequently, just above 30 percent of all Hispanics are uninsured . Moreover, only 62.9 percent of all Hispanics have a high school graduate in 2010 . Even African Americans with 84.2 percent have much more. In addition to that, only 13.9 percent of the Hispanics have a college graduate or more SUGAR more=higher) .

Taking it all round, they have by a long way the lowest standard of education and with this the worst chances to get a job and improve their situation.
(SUGAR: Was soll der Satz aussagen?)

To crown it all (SUGAR: Als Krönung, oder was? "Zu allem Überfluss überstzt man besser mit " into the bargain") , the Hispanics who have a daily occupation, only have a real median household income of 37,759 dollars . That implies that a daily occupation not necessarily helps to get a middle-class life, but improves their situation in spite of everything in any case. Thought 35 percent of the Hispanics are immigrated in the last five years, bilingualism is usual. Nonetheless 70 percent of them talk (SUGAR: SPEAK!) Spanish with some Anglicism at home or with the family. In terms of religion, the Hispanics are in complete agreement. 72 percent of them are Catholic, 19 percent are Protestant and most of the others have no religious preferences.

There cultural and political meaning increased in the last years steadily. The traditional Spanish music influences all the major musical genres in this day(S) and age. With Robert Goizueta, the head of The Coca-Cola Company or Charlie Sheen as an actor, the Hispanics are represented in business and media as well. Beside the same circle of influence as the other minority groups(wieder GROUPS) , for example science, sports and literature, the Hispanics influence the political and economic happenings, too. Based on their baby boom and strong growing percentage of total population, this group wins influences at a high rate. For the simple reason that they often live in big states with a large number of electors, they can affect presidential elections deeply. For the same reason, they can turn the scale in so called swing states which have no discernible party affiliation. In the economic sense, Hispanics embody a large share in the market. By way of example the baby and children sector can mention. Almost half of all newborn babies are descendants of Hispanics. In summary, it can be stated that the Hispanics as a whole influences the United States in every department.
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Zusätzliches zum Deckblatt:

Wie schreibe ich "Frau Beispiel" -> 'Ms. Beispiel' oder was???

Ms. Beispiel

Wie kann ich Klasse 13 schreiben? -> 'class 13' oder wie???
JA!

Wie wird folgendes formuliert -> 'verfasst im Dezember 2011'
Wie in deutsch: Gar nicht! schreib drunter: Vorname Name, HAmburg im Dezember 2011

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Mehr scaffe ich heute nicht...

Sorry, aber es ist zu viel und zu knapp!